Post by resolution fox on Dec 28, 2012 18:15:02 GMT -5
Okay, so I've been reaaaaaallyyyy obsessed with Sonic Unleashed nowadays, so if I post an overabundance of Unleashed stuff, I'm sorry!
So, I've got that TSOTN story going on, but it moved way too fast (no pun intended, I swear!) and I need a bit of help with that story! You can send me pms, email me @ cadpig1099@aol.co.uk or message me cookiespott on Yahoo!.
Well, to be honest, I like the looks of the Werehog, but I don't like the gameplay, as its just me mashing the triggers on the GameCube controller, which gets REALLY repetitive after a while, but that can wait for a review.
Also, I'm not good at writing speed/adrenaline filled Sonic stories, so once again you can do the methods above to help improve my writing!
Even though I actually did the first few 'Mature' Sonic stories,I'm banning them now xD it was strange for me to write them and to allow them REDO: I will not accept stories with... You know... In it and will allow the sort of gore that's in some Molly Moon books. And that's saying something. Now only stories with slight gore (like Scream Street if you've read it) or generic 'Halloween' Sonic stories, like 'Howloween' which was on Fanfiction.net before I got banned for some weird reason 
and I'm currently re-writing it as a brand new story, 'Curse of The Werehog'. The original story name had nothing to do with the story, except the fact that it was a pun of Halloween, and it including Sonic getting all the chaos emeralds all at once, which was entirely stupid of me, and chapters 2 through the rest of the chapters were never posted due to fast paced emerald collecting and the fact that Sonic and Tails were in a flat which no-one else lived in, yet had a haunted cellar, in which Sonic, Cream and Tails investigate, but Cheese, Cream and then Tails being possessed, and then them stitching Cheese up whilst she was possessed, which was going a little too far than normal. The only interesting part in my opinion was when Cream, Sonic and Tails did a team tornado and broke out of an experimenting tube that was NOT created by Robotnik, but a Tails-like fox, who was silver coloured, named Grace, but then got into 'Tangled' territory by the fact that Sonic cries (which was really unlike him) and somehow lands on a spot where a chaos emerald was in Cheese (somehow, I felt like I was on crack, staying up until 3am in the morning to work on it, and now it's not such a mystery how this weird stuff ended up) and then she comes back to life, and the chaos emerald is magically in Sonic's hand.
Keep in mind that I'm a My Little Pony fan, but I won't post stuff about it on this board.
Anyway, Tails ends up being a 'werefox' somehow, and it's not explained, not even by me xD A flower also turns Amy and (somehow) Cosmo evil, and I don't know what's up with that, and leads to a wild goose chase. In a Howloween sequel I'm writing, Tails was missing from a camp for goodness knows how long, and Sonic finds him in a forest clearing with the same flower from the original. Only when Tails turns Amy evil AGAIN Sonic reminiscences on the events prior and remembers about it all. He has to then protect Hermia, an old friend (and my OC) from the two, but the two end up half turning evil anyway, but that's all I have up to now.
The Curse Of The Werehog includes a Cream doll (not the Tails doll, who is good in another one of my stories) that was in the end of Howloween as an inanimate toy that Cream called 'Creamie' in which a ghost (which rides on the wind) possesses it and turns Sonic into a Werehog, but by a strange energy. Another person's fan character, Alla, is in this, as in the flipnote Hatena version someone signed up with Alla, and is waiting with Amy for Sonic to arrive for her date, which he's half an hour late for. Alla then sees Sonic being held by the neck by the Cream doll, who is saying that he is its servant and must do what it tells him to do, but Sonic wont take it, and attempts to attack the cream doll at the same time it's building up energy, in which Amy pushes him out the way, self sacrificing, to end up turning into a Werehog too, but the Cream doll then takes control of Sonic, and attempts to persuade Amy to join them.
Well, next time I'll discuss more of my stories! Bye!
So, I've got that TSOTN story going on, but it moved way too fast (no pun intended, I swear!) and I need a bit of help with that story! You can send me pms, email me @ cadpig1099@aol.co.uk or message me cookiespott on Yahoo!.
Well, to be honest, I like the looks of the Werehog, but I don't like the gameplay, as its just me mashing the triggers on the GameCube controller, which gets REALLY repetitive after a while, but that can wait for a review.
Also, I'm not good at writing speed/adrenaline filled Sonic stories, so once again you can do the methods above to help improve my writing!
Even though I actually did the first few 'Mature' Sonic stories,
and I'm currently re-writing it as a brand new story, 'Curse of The Werehog'. The original story name had nothing to do with the story, except the fact that it was a pun of Halloween, and it including Sonic getting all the chaos emeralds all at once, which was entirely stupid of me, and chapters 2 through the rest of the chapters were never posted due to fast paced emerald collecting and the fact that Sonic and Tails were in a flat which no-one else lived in, yet had a haunted cellar, in which Sonic, Cream and Tails investigate, but Cheese, Cream and then Tails being possessed, and then them stitching Cheese up whilst she was possessed, which was going a little too far than normal. The only interesting part in my opinion was when Cream, Sonic and Tails did a team tornado and broke out of an experimenting tube that was NOT created by Robotnik, but a Tails-like fox, who was silver coloured, named Grace, but then got into 'Tangled' territory by the fact that Sonic cries (which was really unlike him) and somehow lands on a spot where a chaos emerald was in Cheese (somehow, I felt like I was on crack, staying up until 3am in the morning to work on it, and now it's not such a mystery how this weird stuff ended up) and then she comes back to life, and the chaos emerald is magically in Sonic's hand.Keep in mind that I'm a My Little Pony fan, but I won't post stuff about it on this board.
Anyway, Tails ends up being a 'werefox' somehow, and it's not explained, not even by me xD A flower also turns Amy and (somehow) Cosmo evil, and I don't know what's up with that, and leads to a wild goose chase. In a Howloween sequel I'm writing, Tails was missing from a camp for goodness knows how long, and Sonic finds him in a forest clearing with the same flower from the original. Only when Tails turns Amy evil AGAIN Sonic reminiscences on the events prior and remembers about it all. He has to then protect Hermia, an old friend (and my OC
) from the two, but the two end up half turning evil anyway, but that's all I have up to now.The Curse Of The Werehog includes a Cream doll (not the Tails doll, who is good in another one of my stories) that was in the end of Howloween as an inanimate toy that Cream called 'Creamie' in which a ghost (which rides on the wind) possesses it and turns Sonic into a Werehog, but by a strange energy. Another person's fan character, Alla, is in this, as in the flipnote Hatena version someone signed up with Alla, and is waiting with Amy for Sonic to arrive for her date, which he's half an hour late for. Alla then sees Sonic being held by the neck by the Cream doll, who is saying that he is its servant and must do what it tells him to do, but Sonic wont take it, and attempts to attack the cream doll at the same time it's building up energy, in which Amy pushes him out the way, self sacrificing, to end up turning into a Werehog too, but the Cream doll then takes control of Sonic, and attempts to persuade Amy to join them.
Well, next time I'll discuss more of my stories! Bye!